It was a day when you'd pray for the gift of wisdom; to the hiss of a traveller's kettle hung high on a hook scorched by a turf fire stacked over blistering bogwood smoking the kitchen out with the spit of its trapped sap. It was a day when you'd light a yellow beeswax candle burning the half lit hours down to the stump: recalling incense,the soft swish of white Dominican robes and the clink of rosary beads at their waists as they passed on nightly study patrol. It was a day when our kitchen smelt like a land of milk and honey gold with cinnamon baking on buns in the oven exotic with the tang of lapsang souchong poured from cups so thin that they felt on your lips light as a lover's touch. It was a day blessed by the scent of an unnamed essence, sweet as oranges waiting to be picked in Moroccan gardens; no harm could come to us as the light of angels shone off the glass in the dresser, and you held me close on your lap snug as the shell on a conker. This poem feels Christmassy to me - just sharing it as my blog for this week! Enjoy! copyright Patricia-Anne Moore
Beautiful poem, Patricia, and even better when you read it in public.
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Thanks Michael!
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Loved the poem PA
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delighted that you like it – it really just ‘came’ to me and it feels Christmassy. Hoping for more ‘arrivals’ in the New Year!
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Appreciate your second comment too. Know you’ll be very busy with Christmas but hope to send you my ‘Home Visit’ poem for critical comment oon if that’s ok. Happy Christmas to you and Mary ,P.A.
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Love it ~ especially the cinnamon line!
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Hi Jean thanks for this comment – yes even though I am not a baker I could see the colours and get the smells while I was writing this! A poet brought an old tea pot, a gold coloured bag of lapsang souchong, along to a workshop I was involved in and asked us to write something and this is what came!
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Lovely poem. Enjoyed many of the memories so similar to my own. Especially the Dominican nun and the rosary. Didn’t realise you were a “Dominican Girl”. As well!!!!!
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